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SSJ4_Truhan
12-12-2004, 04:48 PM
Episode 2: Power Level Higher!

Announcer: On the last episode, Corey and Condor were fighting, but Corey could not get Super Perfect Cell's Fusion Clone, and was beaten down to a pullp, so he transforms into a SSJ2, find out what happens today on Dragonball FB!

Corey: I guess this is the time to kill you!

Condor: That won't be necessary. You see Corey, or might people might call you the Bandit Saiyan, I have another form that is now completed from my download system, and I can regenerate whenever I want! Hahahahahaha!

Corey: Arrgh! Dang! I need to get him to suffer! Hey Condor, I have a form that goes with Super Saiyan 2, It is Super Saiyan 2 Saiyan from 3(Ultra Super Saiyan 2).

Condor: Now lets battle!

( Condor battles with Corey, giving him the kamehameha, and Condor was beating him senseless, but Corey gets up, and does a fast instant battle formation to Condor, and then gives him the Super Kamehameha)

Corey: Had enough Condor?

Condor: Hey, I am just getting warmed up! Besides, I have many more forms that you don't even know about! Hahahaha! Wait till I pull off my Ultra Meteor Death Wave Field!

Corey: I have already survived your Ultimate Meteor, Condor, you think I can't survive your other Ultra Meteor Field? Believe me, I have survived many waves, blasts, and anything that could destroy the earth! I have pulled off blasts on my other planet, Planet Extrect, with my ultimate leader Extrect, who can go SSJ3 and kill anyone! Except me of course!

Condor: You know something Ultra Meteor Death Field!!
(Does the field, and almost kills the bandit saiyan, and he is on the gorund for about a whole week)

Dr. Mortimer: Are you ok?

Corey: Aghh! Where am I? I am in a battle with Condor! What did he do? Augghhh!

Brianna: Are you ok, Corey?

Corey: Who...Who are you?

Dr. Mortimer: She is the one who performed CPR, while you were on the ground

Corey: So there are survivors on the Earth?

Dr. M: Yes, but mainly 6/10 were underground

Corey: We...We...might have to rebuild the cities, most of...them are down...

Brianna: Is he gonna be ok Doctor?

Dr. M: He will be fine in a day

Brianna: Thank God, I want him to go out with me after his recooperation..

Dr. M: I found this in his pocket, it is some kind of weird shaped bean...

Brianna: Let him eat it, to show his affection for me..

(Dr. Mortimer gives him the WEIRD SHAPED senzu bean, and Corey is better than ever!)

Corey: Yes! Augghh!! I am finally awake! Thanks doc for giving me a senzu bean!!

Brianna: What is a Senzu Bean?

Corey: A Senzu bean is a Bean that cures me fully, and recooperates me back in action, and makes me more powerful than ever!

Brianna: Will.... you... Go on a date with me?

Corey: Ummm.....OK, I'll go on a date with you since you saved my life....

Brianna: Are you a humna? I forgot to ask you..

Corey: No, I am a Saiyan, a saiyan that is a bandit, some call me the Bandit Saiyan if you like, and I have survived everything that has almost killed me.

(episode ends)

Announcer: On the next episode of Dragonball FB, it has been 4 years since Condor took out Corey with that final blow, and Brianna and Corey have a kid together, his name is Bandire, and Bandire is a saiyan that learns a very powerful attack at the age of four, they call it the Taijutsinkoha, it is a kamehameha with a little twist to it, and it is a very powerful move that can almost kill anybody!!

teen-gotenks
12-12-2004, 04:54 PM
Originally posted by SSJ4_Truhan
Episode 2: Power Level Higher!

Announcer: On the last episode, Corey and Condor were fighting, but Corey could not get Super Perfect Cell's Fusion Clone, and was beaten down to a pullp, so he transforms into a SSJ2, find out what happens today on Dragonball FB!

Corey: I guess this is the time to kill you!

Condor: That won't be necessary. You see Corey, or might people might call you the Bandit Saiyan, I have another form that is now completed from my download system, and I can regenerate whenever I want! Hahahahahaha!

Corey: Arrgh! Dang! I need to get him to suffer! Hey Condor, I have a form that goes with Super Saiyan 2, It is Super Saiyan 2 Saiyan from 3(Ultra Super Saiyan 2).

Condor: Now lets battle!

( Condor battles with Corey, giving him the kamehameha, and Condor was beating him senseless, but Corey gets up, and does a fast instant battle formation to Condor, and then gives him the Super Kamehameha)

Corey: Had enough Condor?

Condor: Hey, I am just getting warmed up! Besides, I have many more forms that you don't even know about! Hahahaha! Wait till I pull off my Ultra Meteor Death Wave Field!

Corey: I have already survived your Ultimate Meteor, Condor, you think I can't survive your other Ultra Meteor Field? Believe me, I have survived many waves, blasts, and anything that could destroy the earth! I have pulled off blasts on my other planet, Planet Extrect, with my ultimate leader Extrect, who can go SSJ3 and kill anyone! Except me of course!

Condor: You know something Ultra Meteor Death Field!!
(Does the field, and almost kills the bandit saiyan, and he is on the gorund for about a whole week)

Dr. Mortimer: Are you ok?

Corey: Aghh! Where am I? I am in a battle with Condor! What did he do? Augghhh!

Brianna: Are you ok, Corey?

Corey: Who...Who are you?

Dr. Mortimer: She is the one who performed CPR, while you were on the ground

Corey: So there are survivors on the Earth?

Dr. M: Yes, but mainly 6/10 were underground

Corey: We...We...might have to rebuild the cities, most of...them are down...

Brianna: Is he gonna be ok Doctor?

Dr. M: He will be fine in a day

Brianna: Thank God, I want him to go out with me after his recooperation..

Dr. M: I found this in his pocket, it is some kind of weird shaped bean...

Brianna: Let him eat it, to show his affection for me..

(Dr. Mortimer gives him the WEIRD SHAPED senzu bean, and Corey is better than ever!)

Corey: Yes! Augghh!! I am finally awake! Thanks doc for giving me a senzu bean!!

Brianna: What is a Senzu Bean?

Corey: A Senzu bean is a Bean that cures me fully, and recooperates me back in action, and makes me more powerful than ever!

Brianna: Will.... you... Go on a date with me?

Corey: Ummm.....OK, I'll go on a date with you since you saved my life....

Brianna: Are you a humna? I forgot to ask you..

Corey: No, I am a Saiyan, a saiyan that is a bandit, some call me the Bandit Saiyan if you like, and I have survived everything that has almost killed me.

(episode ends)

Announcer: On the next episode of Dragonball FB, it has been 4 years since Condor took out Corey with that final blow, and Brianna and Corey have a kid together, his name is Bandire, and Bandire is a saiyan that learns a very powerful attack at the age of four, they call it the Taijutsinkoha, it is a kamehameha with a little twist to it, and it is a very powerful move that can almost kill anybody!!



hey that really good
what does fb mean?

SSJ4_Truhan
12-12-2004, 04:56 PM
it means Future Bound

UssjTrunks
12-12-2004, 05:05 PM
Nice story. It was really good.

SSJ4_Truhan
12-12-2004, 09:20 PM
Thanks Trunks, I really appreciate the comment.....

RetardedGoku200
12-12-2004, 09:22 PM
POSER! lol You story is pretty good. Do you like my First 9 episodes of Dragonball F?

RetardedGoku200
12-12-2004, 09:24 PM
It looks like you liked my story cuz you kinda made it like mine whic i made before you

SSJ4_Truhan
12-12-2004, 09:32 PM
I didnt really copy your story, I didnt even read your story yet.. I think it is amazing that people like my story though...

RetardedGoku200
12-12-2004, 09:35 PM
yea you did, your the one that wrote on my thread
you asked what F meant

SSJ4_Truhan
12-12-2004, 09:42 PM
I only read one episode, and anyways, what does the F mean

RetardedGoku200
12-12-2004, 09:43 PM
Final. can i post my first 9 eps of Dragonball F on your thread cuz my thread aint goin too good with it

SSJ4_Truhan
12-13-2004, 03:14 PM
no, because my thread is a good thread, and I dont accept other stories..

Juuroku Gou
12-13-2004, 03:16 PM
Wow. That'll be the day. A character in the DB universe named 'Corey'. I've just become 30 times stupider because I read this.

SSJ4_Truhan
12-13-2004, 03:18 PM
Wow. You really are sarcastic arent you? Hey, dude, everybody else liked it, you dont have to be freaking jealous, oh btw, Corey is my name, so I thought I would tweak it a little...

SpIrItOfGoHaN
12-15-2004, 08:41 PM
Your story is pretty good but one thing:

It would probably attract more people if you used some names that aren't so usual.

Check out mine to see what I mean.

Overall out of 5 I would give you 4 1/2 out of 5

SSJ4_Truhan
12-15-2004, 08:50 PM
Sweet! Read my third story, sorry about the usual name thing, one of the names that I used for my second story was Netekan, he is like a type of Goku, and Vegeta, he is both careless and careful at points, but mostly careless

SpIrItOfGoHaN
12-15-2004, 08:57 PM
don't be sorry about hte names I am only sugessting....

Evil_Z
12-15-2004, 09:11 PM
i think you should make it more original

and wouldn't Condor have destroyed the planet i mean it's over four years

and the girl was a little desprete for a boyfriend lol :haha: i though it was a little funny

then there was the name thing

other than that stuff it was pretty good

SSJ4_Truhan
12-15-2004, 09:12 PM
One thing Evil Z, why do you always laugh so much?

Evil_Z
12-15-2004, 09:14 PM
Originally posted by SSJ4_Truhan
One thing Evil Z, why do you always laugh so much? because i do lol:haha:

Ekco_Star
12-15-2004, 09:29 PM
its good

SpIrItOfGoHaN
12-16-2004, 08:52 AM
Evil you laugh so much that one day that will be all that you can do.