Noobs Park, Need some Constructive Crit.

[Andeexfactor]

Hey guys!

I'm not meaning for this park to stun anyone.... just want some constructive criticism as to how to make it better.

Pterodactyl Flight: Entrance, in my Dinosaur themed section.
http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0017.jpg

A Nameless Alpine Coaster in my Bookland Section: Ride Overview and Part of the Que

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0021.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0023.jpg
Not much, but I'll have more pics up soon. Any critcism is great!

Your Eternal Noob,
Andee

[TheSkipper]

Andee, please resize your pics. use edit and replace every IMG reference with shot

[CDN1212]

the main thing i notice as far as crit, is the blockyness of the ground in the 2nd pic. other than that, its not too bad.

oh, and i can't see, but after the first hill on the coaster, you definatally better be banking your turns to be preventing whiplash if not already ;)

[Andeexfactor]

Sry bout the picture size, but thnx for the crit CDN!

[maskedbandit101]

I can see lots of potential here. If I might suggest it, look online at lots of pictures of theme parks. Find things that you like, and use them for inspiration. On thing that caught my eye was the lack of a shade-providing...thing...for the cue. Add more scenery. I like what you did with the Jurassic theming. Focus a ton on detail, and practice terraforming on another map or a blank section of the park. The squares, as previously mentioned, don't look so great. Try smoothing them out. Keep working! I want to see some more updates to see how you progress.

[Andeexfactor]

Ok so I worked on it a little more. Here's some stuff.......

These are some pics of my parks entrance which is pier themed......

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0013.jpg

And at night...

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0037.jpg

Another photo of my dinosaur themed coaster...

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0026.jpg

Entrance to my unnamed coaster and a shot of my pier section......

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0032.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0038.jpg


And finally some pretty noobish terraforming on my other coaster......

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0040.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/Andeexfactor/Shot0039.jpg

[°Celsius]

The main thing I noticed was the use of the word "n00b" in your headline...

[Ice101]

Don't use the other stalls but use the custom stalls

[adamb241]

Try not making your landscaping so choppy.

[Chicken Biscuit]

Vary the trees a bit, smooth out those blocks a bit more and use the custom stalls (they blend a lot better). Other than that, I see a good deal of potential for this park.

[xfreakx1687]

Like Chicken Biscuit said, make sure that land is smoothed out, there is a button after you click on the shovel that looks like a hill with an arrow over it, click on it, then click on the last button once that menu opens, it will smooth out your land greatly. Also maybe put in some water or something like that, add some different trees and some bushes. But most of all, have fun creating a park that you enjoy!