Can I have a full opinion on this made-up character?

[dbz@yahoo.com]

Sorry for this being in the wrong thread, but I couldn't think of anywhere else to show this to everyone, just to at least get everyone's attention.

Look at this video I put together:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1fSepH5Fqww

What do you think? What's your opinion?

[dbz_hunter 001]

Sorry for this being in the wrong thread, but I couldn't think of anywhere else to show this to everyone, just to at least get everyone's attention.

Look at this video I put together:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1fSepH5Fqww

What do you think? What's your opinion?
i will not lie to you. when i saw that pic, i was like wth and the 1st thought that came in my head was "garbage".

the good thing about it was that it was creative and definitely something unique in my eyes. but you did draw the pic very well, it looked as if you put some effort into it which makes it a 6/10.

[dbz@yahoo.com]

Do you think it needs more life added to it?

[dbz_hunter 001]

when you say "life", what do you mean by that?

btw, the devil wing or bat wing looks much more better than the angel wing does.

[dbz@yahoo.com]

When I say life, I mean more shading in more of the proper areas and color of course like using pastels or something.

Also, the devil wing and the angel wing are meant to be the way they are.

Her name is Clair. She's a cross-breed between demon and angel.

Her power is unimaginable! Her force is not to be reckoned with!

Her powers rival no other!

Well, gotta be more detailed I guess, but I think it's great!

[Flaming Gohan]

Move to the CC

[dbz_hunter 001]

well if there was some more shading added to this, it can look better than it currently does right now. what makes her devil wing better than her angel wing is how well it is shaded and how much detail was put into it.

also, try adding a background to it. with all that space it makes the char look dead in a way.

[dbz@yahoo.com]

I am here for the char, not the background. What do I need that for?

That is so lame. It would add more detail to the background, but the detailing definitely wouldn't support the char.:(:confused::sour::pout:

[ultimateGoHaN99]

It looked pretty interesting and if you were ever going to make a manga
over the char. I would read it.

[dbz@yahoo.com]

It looked pretty interesting and if you were ever going to make a manga
over the char. I would read it.


Thanks, Sasuke!