sugestions and cretions of a cover for a Dragon Ball Z Burst limit

[gohanks0]

here my creations

links:

first screen

http://img176.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=76288_dragon_ball_z_122_396lo.JPG

second screen

http://img107.imagevenue.com/view.php?image=76285_imagem_122_674lo.JPG

i udpaded the second sreen

http://img209.imagevenue.com/view.php?image=80585_imagem11_122_179lo.JPG

11/12 !!!! my new job

http://img104.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=03899_llol807_122_691lo.JPG



job by unreal juggernaut http://www.cazatrucos.com/imagenes/d...kaichi%202.jpg (http://www.cazatrucos.com/imagenes/dragon%20Ball%20Z%20Budokai%20Tenkaichi%202.jpg)

[Master_Gohan]

Wow.. That one is great !
I certainly want to see it as a cover.

[WolverineX]

They suck.

[Master_Gohan]

I think its great.

[WolverineX]

Well good for you :D

Now read my sig.:p

[Master_Gohan]

No thanks, I'd rather keep my money.:cool:

[Kayro Shin]

They need a lot of improvement.
Also, what is "IIII"?

[Master_Gohan]

"IIII" means 4.

[WolverineX]

he means IV.

[Kayro Shin]

"IIII" means 4.

Oh really :rolleyes:.
I knew that, I was just trying to make fun of him. I may suck at Math, but I know Roman Numerology.

[Master_Gohan]

Lol, seems like he doesn't want to respond.

[Kaioken X10]

here my creations
http://img111.imagevenue.com/aAfkjfp01fo1i-29669/loc923/74514_imagem_122_923lo.JPG
http://img168.imagevenue.com/aAfkjfp01fo1i-12270/loc883/74524_dragon_ball_z_122_883lo.JPG
links:

first screen

http://img176.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=76288_dragon_ball_z_122_396lo.JPG

second screen

http://img107.imagevenue.com/view.php?image=76285_imagem_122_674lo.JPG Man those will not go good on the ps3 cover so keep making others ok.

[Mattroid]

Still a good first try...

[WolverineX]

That cover has been used, so please try to be creative.

[Mattroid]

It's the European Shin Budokai 2 cover...

[gohanks0]

ok, i've udpaded my cover

http://img209.imagevenue.com/view.php?image=80585_imagem11_122_179lo.JPG

tomorrow, i'll be made a creative cover, i promise

[Mattroid]

Untill tomorrow, then! Hope you'll succeed!

[gohanks0]

Untill tomorrow, then! Hope you'll succeed!


thanks

[Mattroid]

I allways support arwork creators...especially beginners, like that they can "grow"and become better!

[DesiGamer2005]

I like the second one a lot BTW, where did you get the Shin Budokai Another Road artwork from?

[gohanks0]

I like the second one a lot BTW, where did you get the Shin Budokai Another Road artwork from?



google images

[Deathwing]

I will give you a constructive critic.

In the first one the character selection is bad, you should use more characters and from different sagas not just one saga, remember it's a Dragon Ball Z game with a huge list of characters and you should put a better background.

Improve the cut-outs of the labels, the renders of the characters are great.

In the second one I like a lot the selection of characters but you still need to have some variety between villains and heros, the background is a lot better but plain and again you must fix the renders of the labels.

Hope it helps and continue improving.

[Soul-Ex]

What you should try is gather a bunch of pics of bad guys and good guys and make them all rushing at eachother or something(if you can find good pics that is, lol)

[DBilzZ]

Firstly, good idea for a thread! :) Secondly, good attempts, they're cool. Keep at it! :up:

[gohanks0]

i return !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


look, i found this on the google images


http://www.cazatrucos.com/imagenes/dragon%20Ball%20Z%20Budokai%20Tenkaichi%202.jpg



i am begginer on this work, so made this......

is creative this ????

here a link: http://img104.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=03899_llol807_122_691lo.JPG

http://img104.imagevenue.com/aAfkjfp01fo1i-10715/loc691/03899_llol807_122_691lo.JPG

[DBMaster3000]

Not bad, but might I suggest you put all the Z Fighters on the cover, not just Super Saiyans?

[gohanks0]

Not bad, but might I suggest you put all the Z Fighters on the cover, not just Super Saiyans?


yes, you right, i will be made your suggestions in a next time, thanks for the suggestion.

[Kayro Shin]

i am begginer on this work, so made this......

is creative this ????

here a link: http://img104.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=03899_llol807_122_691lo.JPG

http://img104.imagevenue.com/aAfkjfp01fo1i-10715/loc691/03899_llol807_122_691lo.JPG

Not to sound rude or anything, but that one is pretty bad. You just copied and pasted the images :bored:

[DesiGamer2005]

i am begginer on this work, so made this......

is creative this ????

here a link: http://img104.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=03899_llol807_122_691lo.JPG

http://img104.imagevenue.com/aAfkjfp01fo1i-10715/loc691/03899_llol807_122_691lo.JPG


The characters have a noticeable gap between them, the "4" looks completely fake and the background is to simple. You just need to improve on these and you're set.

[DBMaster3000]

Give him a break, he doesn't have all day to do this (its better than what I can do).

[DesiGamer2005]

Give him a break, he doesn't have all day to do this (its better than what I can do).

Who said we're giving him a time limit? Just giving suggestions. That's all. :)

[DBMaster3000]

Yeah, but you don't have to so caustic about it.

[DesiGamer2005]

Yeah, but you don't have to so caustic about it.

And how was that caustic? I was straightforward on good tips for his cover. All I said was that he just needs those things done to make it a good cover.

[super gohan]

I think the second one is pretty good,but the rest need work.

[gohanks0]

that so hard to make this covers, anyway i need for more experience and in a next cover, i promise to make a great background(this part is more difficult to make)

[InvincibleNahan]

Those are pretty good but could use some improvement.