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kylr23
04-27-2008, 05:18 PM
Long ago about in 2006 a park was made it was dubbed my worse park ever.
I called it Wild west Adventure. It was my first finished park and I still hate it.
Year past and Adventura 2 came out, a mega theam park based off of the original. I was suppose to be a team park at the end It was let out. A little while latter Adventura 3 was put on the forums. One word.
FAIL!
The worst team project it latterly fell apart, and it was my falt. Now
and soon like 2 months soon my Atari account will be 3 years old. 3 long year of horror and counting. Now I give you a little celebration for this with a new park. Gentle men!
I give you!
ADVENTUARA 3

The entry took me a while to do, I wanted it to feel old.
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/3774/adventur1fs0.jpg

Heck this ride took a lot of time just to get it right. Oh thats Atlantian express in the back ground.
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/7780/adventur2gv1.jpg

Hmm I wounder what this could be?
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/3584/adventur3bc4.jpg

a nice place to eat, I'm not roofing it yet. I would like to know if I should vine the inside and out side?
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/3439/adventur4do1.jpg

A nice looping coaster, it looks a little err odd. :bulb:
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/2227/adventur5fn2.jpg

Oh look Atlantian Express.

New press on Atlantian Express
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Atlantian Express is a unique ride from big coaster inc.
Well the lay out that is. Atlantian Express is a half pipe coaster
with some nice rolls thrown in. This ride will be fact you might lose your lunch.
Opening summer 2008

:bulb:
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/4954/adventur6do2.jpg

A unknow ride, hmm I know its a gient splash boat.
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/7458/adventur7qn6.jpg

This was odd.
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/4006/oppsbr8.jpg

Verkia!
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Verkia is a extended coaster by your truly, Kyle and Ashleys studios.
The master of extended lay outs and shows. This compact yet fun ride will be sure to thrill all of our guest. The X cars should prove worthey of the task for the ride, It is uknown atm what this ride will look like. But like the park it will have a Atlantis theam.


More soon.:)

Plokoon111
04-27-2008, 05:53 PM
You improved big time! Good job so far!

deathfearsnone
04-27-2008, 05:59 PM
yes you have come along ways great job on the park so far

Mudkip
04-27-2008, 06:02 PM
this park sucks............... just kidding. I hope you have great success with this park. Failure is not fun. All that i see right now that needs fixing is that rediculously huge food court can be trimmed down and your buildings are a little bit boring in some areas. Everything else looks pretty cool.

kylr23
04-28-2008, 10:49 AM
that rediculously huge food court can be trimmed down
Your right I should trim it down a bit.

your buildings are a little bit boring in some areas. Everything else looks pretty cool.

Care to point that out? Or at lest give me some ideas to make it better.
Every thing is still under work it will be some good time before a new update will happen.

Hectix
04-28-2008, 01:59 PM
^^ I agree with Mudkip. That food court is quite big. I really like the roller coasters though.

kylr23
05-07-2008, 04:43 PM
Todays update is sort of bad... Oh well! I will make my text hard to read and it will all be in 101's:p.

Verkia or soo to be Gladior Dam-age is finished.
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/6610/verkiaqg5.jpg
More treeez!10101!
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/7596/coasterwg8.jpg
Oooo I hope the glass wont break.
<kyle_> "That isnt possible I made sure our drone...err servents made it strong." He grins. "Besi...wait this isnt the rp world... Errr." He makes a run for it!
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/7601/oooodz5.jpg
OMG! SEA WORLD!1010!!!:mad::up:
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/1504/showst2.jpg

The food cort is now smaller!:p
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8637/smallerkv9.jpg

<kyle_> What did the fish say when it hits a wall?
Err I dont know.
<kyle_>"dam how can you not know that!". He giggles.
Maybe the fish died?
*kyle face palms.
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/3983/thingmi5.jpg

For those who are clueless <kyle_> is a rp char I play:p. The link below is a session I loved, enjoy it.
Clicky (http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/373818/)

If you want to know more go to my sigi and read my blog (*titled rp cake*)

Fbh007
05-08-2008, 12:53 PM
Great!
I like the plants on the building and the supports!

0m3g4
05-08-2008, 01:57 PM
That foodcourt thing is still HUGE. The rest of the park looks good.

Mudkip
05-08-2008, 04:43 PM
^I agree, you still really only need about a fourth of that, also, it needs more vendors and ground covors so that there isn't that ugly patch of grass inside of it.

icutoo
05-08-2008, 05:19 PM
Add more dimension and depth to the food court. Don't make it a square.

Escapade Isle
05-08-2008, 05:27 PM
This park is pretty good when looking at the rides BUT
I have to say, it looks like it was thrown together too quickly. There isn't that filled up, great feel to it... I think it needs more gardens or plants or rocks or waterfalls in between the attractions and shops and rides.
Your roller coaster is a thumbs up, though.

animal king
05-08-2008, 05:30 PM
I like Gladiaor Dam-age

kylr23
05-09-2008, 05:33 PM
Fbh007: Thanks :)

0m3g4: Yeah I fixed that.

Mudkip:More? How aboult less venders :p. Thanks for the sugestion though.

icutoo:Yeah :( I will fix that....DONE!:p

Escapade Isle: The water fall idea isnt to bad. I will show a over view just to get the hang of size. I might make a waterfall tower. Im basing some areas of the park on a little rp chan on Mirc. The water fall tower will be just that a tower with a water fall. :p Yeah more trees flowers ect.

animal king: Thanks.

Yes there is a parking lot:p Also nere by the new quad trak is a new small food cort. There might be some bambooed buildings soon, and some metalic. But its not confermed.
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/6785/mapsp6.jpg

Oh if any one read the little rp log tell me what you think of it. :p

Dr.Pest
05-13-2008, 02:55 PM
nice !! i like the disko coaster theme !!

MIKENYM
05-13-2008, 03:57 PM
Everyone is right, that food court is huge! At least put a roof over it so you can't see it from the overview!

kylr23
05-22-2008, 09:17 PM
This is a small update but hey its bettah then nothing.
I told you the food cort is smaller.
http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/4025/ooooosr3.jpg
And theres a race track.
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/5876/trackre9.jpg

Um what the heck is this?
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/5875/umms4.jpg
Some guy who claims to have alien contact I beleave his name was Belgabor. ;) He resently discovered some odd new ride indeed shawn loved the consept art.:haha:

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/3306/jjon0.jpg