Viva Buena

[Gfhhh]

This tropical park is located in Honolulu, Hawaii. It is planned to be large beautiful park.

Update 1:

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/6023/shot0002gj4.th.png (http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0002gj4.png)
^Entrance back.
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/4562/shot0001yc9.th.png (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0001yc9.png)
^Ticket Booth and Turnstyles.
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/3907/shot0000ih2.th.png (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shot0000ih2.png)
^Another view

I am going to landscape it and add more later.

[rctroker]

I know, Path Land!

How is this tropical? Its just a path. Next tme, create a bit more of a park before posting. Ok?

[Gfhhh]

Ok, I will edit it more laterr today, sorry. And it was going to be tropical anyways.

[plahiaat]

We all plan our parks to be large and beautifull :p

So far, everything looks good.

Some things:
- try to add enough trees NEXT to the path and a few less in the MIDDLE of the path, to "busy" right now.
- Try to make a scenery combination of your own, don't only use the standard sets. Mix them!

[Gfhhh]

We all plan our parks to be large and beautifull :p

So far, everything looks good.

Some things:
- try to add enough trees NEXT to the path and a few less in the MIDDLE of the path, to "busy" right now.
- Try to make a scenery combination of your own, don't only use the standard sets. Mix them!
The trees in the middle are only going to be at the entrance.
And I am going to try to mix the sets.

P.s Not always does plan to make it big and beautiful.:rolleyes:
(I don`t atleast, but this one I do.)

Anyways, Update either tonight or tommorrow.

[SeniorDIEGO]

dunno, Viva Buena?

[Gfhhh]

Thankyou for the new name.

[SeniorDIEGO]

Thankyou for the new name.
Yay :D

[grrt]

Please don't do this to us! Wait till you have some progress on it before you start, and make the pictures bigger. It is impossible to give a genuine comment when all you have is some paths.

[pcwfreak]

Why are there turnstiles that lead off of the path onto the grass? LOL

Needs work... but first, you need to get your pictures bigger and remove the interface with the David Walsh cheat.

[bereth14]

Yet another member of The Untalented. Don't know what that is? Check this out: Link (http://www.ataricommunity.com/forums/showpost.php?p=11203410&postcount=8)

[Gfhhh]

Dud, your parks aren`t any better. It seems the farther you get along with them they get worst. So I wouldn`t be talking. Alos, I am one of the Best designer for a game called ZT2 and everyone always pms me aksing me to build zoos or maps for them.

[RCT3Callum]

Ermm, it looks interesting so far, but a few Criticisms:

First off, please show a little more than the path. :)
Second, use Planters for them trees.
Third, remove half of them trees.
Fourth, make the path a tile wider on each side.
Fifth, line the path with Fences, then bushes, then trees on the outside.

Good luck, and I'll be watching. :)

[03gibbss]

I think most of the people here are being a bit unfair really, I mean everyone was new once he just needs a push in the right direction! Your comment was uncalled for bereth, you can't say he is a member of the untalented from three pics you don't know what there is in store! So it's a bit unfair to have a go at Gfhhh just cos he's new. We all did it when we were new so give him a chance.

Just a little bit of adive Gfhhh:
- Convert your pics to jpg's before you upload, this can be done in paint or in any other image editing software.
- When you upload your pics to an image hosting site if you choose the img tags then the picture should be bigger (change the img tag to the shot tag if they're too big)
- If you rename a peep 'David Walsh' you can get rid of the rct interface which makes for better pictures
- Make sure you landscape the area around your park as this will make it look more realistic
- You might consider adding some fences (i recommend DasMatze's fences and railings) to the area by the trees just for a tad more realism

And if nothing else can be said at least you didn't start the thread with no pictures at all! :p

- 03gibbss

[Gfhhh]

Yeah but I deleted this park asfore I thought it was no good as of now. Most of my parks are way better than this. I guess I just got so nervous of showing one of my parks for the first time.

[pcwfreak]

It's not like I'm saying he sucks. And whenever I say lol, it's usually just some fun/joke. I'm not necessarily laughing at the person.

Everyone's giving their constructive input (except for bereth). I don't see why you need to pull out stuff to insult each person that replied.

[bereth14]

Your comment was uncalled for bereth14, you can't say he is a member of the untalented from three pics you don't know what there is in store!
It was sort of a joke, but really this park could go somewhere, but it is just sitting there, and I don't want it to rot.

[03gibbss]

I did say if you did just genuinly mean to help then i take it back thats just not how some of the posts came across.