ONS-Jumpmonkey

sp1d3rm0nk3y · 05-27-2004, 11:09 AM

This map can be downloaded Here
Hello all, This is my first map called ONS-Jumpmonkey. Please give it a play. All comments and suggestions are welcome.
If anyone on the east coast can spare some server time I would apreshiate some play testing.

Darkmatter · 05-27-2004, 11:13 AM

You know! Why do you that stupid sky?
It looks stupid try to make a cool sky and not a falling sky!!!!!
Also are there some more pictures soo I can see what is more it the ons-map.
Then maybe I will give it a download change!
The pictures looks

!!!!
sya darkmatter

A2597 · 05-27-2004, 11:27 AM

back off darkmonkey, it's better then most peoples tenth maps, and it's his FIRST. I imagion he blew your first map, if you ever opened the editor, out of the water...

ok, onto the crits.

skybox DOES need some work, maybe look at how some stock maps have theirs done, there are also skybox tutorials floating around.

the terrain textures need some work, but hey, I can't even do terrain yet, soooo.

the buildings look ace though.

Good job !

Clanwarz · 05-27-2004, 11:39 AM

Sweet! And this is your first map? Unbelieveable! Can I host this on my site also? This is a very kewl Looking Map! Maybe save you some Bandwidth!

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Dwarden · 05-27-2004, 11:45 AM

Hmm maybe You should minimally put that file into zip archive (or ideally rar

sp1d3rm0nk3y · 05-27-2004, 11:48 AM

They sky needs work I will admit but i am running into issues with skyboxes, please see this post I am having issues where skyinfo actors are causing my map to freak out.
Also I can not get the map image for the ONS radar to load into the map??????
As to posting it on your sight I am honored! I would like to polish it up a bit, then I would be happy to have it on your site THANK YOU!

Clanwarz · 05-27-2004, 12:07 PM

Mirror For SpiderMonkey Beta! No Registration - No Ads - Just Pure Downloads

Here ya Go Bro! Plus it is zipped so it is only 10 megs versus your 40.1 . Save some bandwidth - zip it or download mine. Then edit your link or simple replace your link to my site.

Peace dude and keep me posted on your releases as they come out. I will host them all for you!

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sp1d3rm0nk3y · 05-27-2004, 01:53 PM

wow thank you so much! and thanks for the support!

I will keep you aprised once i finish it up.
again thank you!

Clanwarz · 05-27-2004, 02:31 PM

Server Playing Your Map All Day

64.5.42.176:7777

Give me a few minutes, Upload to the server and redirect now.

Clanwarz · 05-27-2004, 02:48 PM

Had to rename the map! Had to take out the .2k4link. or what ever you had in the middle because the server wouldn't pick up the map. See ya!

Enos Shenk · 05-27-2004, 03:01 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Darkmatter
You know! Why do you that stupid sky?
It looks stupid try to make a cool sky and not a falling sky!!!!!
Also are there some more pictures soo I can see what is more it the ons-map.
Then maybe I will give it a download change!
The pictures looks !!!!
sya darkmatter

Just admit your a complete troll and get it over with. This coming from YOU is about the most ludicrous statement ive ever read on these boards.

Sanguimancer · 05-27-2004, 05:01 PM

Ok, your map has a lot of potential, but still needs work.

Things to improve:

1. Obviously the skybox, but that has been mentioned
2. A lot of the plants on the map are sticking off of the terrain or floating above it
3. The nodes need more cover, you can hit all of them except the cores from the other side of the map
4. You really need to put blocking volumes along the outside edges. You added cliffs that will ideally prevent people, but there are always some that want to get out there and probably will unless you add blocking volumes.

Other than that, its a pretty cool map. The building look nice and the bots seem to run well.

Nihlist · 05-27-2004, 06:17 PM

yes i agree with teh comments made from the above guy, nodes can be hit by tank very easily from a far, perhaps a chang ein elevation of some of these nodes

also i was able to get the manta stuck on several of the elevated platforms

this could be a very good map, nice work so far

05-27-2004, 11:09 AM	#1
sp1d3rm0nk3y Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 53	ONS-Jumpmonkey This map can be downloaded Here Hello all, This is my first map called ONS-Jumpmonkey. Please give it a play. All comments and suggestions are welcome. If anyone on the east coast can spare some server time I would apreshiate some play testing. __________________ ~/.sp1d3rm0nk3y

05-27-2004, 11:13 AM	#2
Darkmatter [XCOM] mapper [UP] Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Netherlands and USA Posts: 183	hmm!!! thats crazy! You know! Why do you that stupid sky? It looks stupid try to make a cool sky and not a falling sky!!!!! Also are there some more pictures soo I can see what is more it the ons-map. Then maybe I will give it a download change! The pictures looks !!!! sya darkmatter __________________ Yesterday I saw you shoot and killing, But all that lives is born to die. So I say to you that nothing really matters, And all you do is stand and cry. Member of Team-Tripwire....

05-27-2004, 11:27 AM	#3
A2597 Narn Batsquad Member Join Date: May 2000 Location: Over yonder hill Posts: 1,901	back off darkmonkey, it's better then most peoples tenth maps, and it's his FIRST. I imagion he blew your first map, if you ever opened the editor, out of the water... ok, onto the crits. skybox DOES need some work, maybe look at how some stock maps have theirs done, there are also skybox tutorials floating around. the terrain textures need some work, but hey, I can't even do terrain yet, soooo. the buildings look ace though. Good job ! __________________ A2597-Resedent Shadow. There are races, millions of years older then ours, who walk among the stars like giants. The Shadows are the oldest of these races... Ambassador Delen of the Minbari Webmaster: B5-Blender

05-27-2004, 11:39 AM	#4
Clanwarz Ut2004Maps.com Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Heart of America Posts: 156	Awesome Sweet! And this is your first map? Unbelieveable! Can I host this on my site also? This is a very kewl Looking Map! Maybe save you some Bandwidth! ---------------------------- Over 400 Ut2004 Files For Your Downloading Pleasure! ---------------------------- Assault Maps Bombing Run Capture The Flag Maps Death Match Maps Double Domination Team Death Match Maps Vehicle Capture The Flag Maps Vehicle Death Match Maps Map Packs Movies Skins Mutators Tools-Patches-Linux __________________ System Administrator Ut2004Maps Clanwarz ClanwarzGamingServers.com Upload Maps, Mods & Skins LINK US!

05-27-2004, 11:48 AM	#6
sp1d3rm0nk3y Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 53	thanks all They sky needs work I will admit but i am running into issues with skyboxes, please see this post I am having issues where skyinfo actors are causing my map to freak out. Also I can not get the map image for the ONS radar to load into the map?????? As to posting it on your sight I am honored! I would like to polish it up a bit, then I would be happy to have it on your site THANK YOU! __________________ ~/.sp1d3rm0nk3y

05-27-2004, 11:45 AM	#5
Dwarden Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Czech Republic Posts: 156	Hmm maybe You should minimally put that file into zip archive (or ideally rar

05-27-2004, 12:07 PM	#7
Clanwarz Ut2004Maps.com Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Heart of America Posts: 156	Mirror For Spider Monkey Mirror For SpiderMonkey Beta! No Registration - No Ads - Just Pure Downloads Here ya Go Bro! Plus it is zipped so it is only 10 megs versus your 40.1 . Save some bandwidth - zip it or download mine. Then edit your link or simple replace your link to my site. Peace dude and keep me posted on your releases as they come out. I will host them all for you! ---------------------------- Over 400 Ut2004 Files For Your Downloading Pleasure! ---------------------------- Assault Maps Bombing Run Capture The Flag Maps Death Match Maps Double Domination Team Death Match Maps Vehicle Capture The Flag Maps Vehicle Death Match Maps Map Packs Movies Skins Mutators Tools-Patches-Linux __________________ System Administrator Ut2004Maps Clanwarz ClanwarzGamingServers.com Upload Maps, Mods & Skins LINK US!

05-27-2004, 01:53 PM	#8
sp1d3rm0nk3y Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 53	WOW! thank you wow thank you so much! and thanks for the support! I will keep you aprised once i finish it up. again thank you! __________________ ~/.sp1d3rm0nk3y

05-27-2004, 02:31 PM	#9
Clanwarz Ut2004Maps.com Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Heart of America Posts: 156	Server for Spider Monkey Server Playing Your Map All Day 64.5.42.176:7777 Give me a few minutes, Upload to the server and redirect now. __________________ System Administrator Ut2004Maps Clanwarz ClanwarzGamingServers.com Upload Maps, Mods & Skins LINK US!

05-27-2004, 02:48 PM	#10
Clanwarz Ut2004Maps.com Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Heart of America Posts: 156	Server Had to rename the map! Had to take out the .2k4link. or what ever you had in the middle because the server wouldn't pick up the map. See ya! __________________ System Administrator Ut2004Maps Clanwarz ClanwarzGamingServers.com Upload Maps, Mods & Skins LINK US!

05-27-2004, 05:01 PM	#12
Sanguimancer New Member Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 5	Ok, your map has a lot of potential, but still needs work. Things to improve: 1. Obviously the skybox, but that has been mentioned 2. A lot of the plants on the map are sticking off of the terrain or floating above it 3. The nodes need more cover, you can hit all of them except the cores from the other side of the map 4. You really need to put blocking volumes along the outside edges. You added cliffs that will ideally prevent people, but there are always some that want to get out there and probably will unless you add blocking volumes. Other than that, its a pretty cool map. The building look nice and the bots seem to run well.

05-27-2004, 06:17 PM	#13
Nihlist Über Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 769	yes i agree with teh comments made from the above guy, nodes can be hit by tank very easily from a far, perhaps a chang ein elevation of some of these nodes also i was able to get the manta stuck on several of the elevated platforms this could be a very good map, nice work so far __________________ Nihilist

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