Dragonball X

[SSJ Taingo]

2 months after the strange dissapearence of Goku...

Episode 1: Piccolo's struggle

Piccolo, the young once powerful namekian fighter was reduced to nothing more then a side-kick, he was no longer the driver of the car or the guy sitting next to the driver, but the guy sitting in the backseat with his seatbelt on trying to hold on for dear life. He looked in the sky, faced with this struggle, this guilt, this torment, medatating, remembering the times of Raditz, Vegeta and Cell, to the points where he was no longer needed for Earths defenses. King Kai approaches Piccolo.

King Kai: Uhh, piccolo?

Piccolo: Leave me alone, I don't want to be bothered.

King Kai: Look, I pulled you out of H.F.I.L now you owe me.

Piccolo: I owe you nothing old man, when I was standing there realizing that I was about to die, that I had to make the right choice to save the planet from destruction of Baby. I realized I no longer was the fear'd monster of Piccolo, or the powerful guardian as Kami, nor was I a simple Body guard as nail, I was just....a namek. I was just someone getting in the way.

King Kai: I sense you're filled with jealousy.

Piccolo: Of course I am old man, think about it. I once surpassed everyone at one point, especially at that brief moment fusing with kami, I actually surpassed the so called, Saiyan form of legend. But these saiyans, seeing them grow in there power was unbelievable. They've reached levels that I can only dream of reaching. Saiyans have no limits, and it has come clear to me that I have just become a weakling compared to Goku and Vegeta.

King Kai: Piccolo, um, there's a tournament in three weeks, whoever wins gets to spend one time on Earth and gets to be trained by the Grand Kai.

Piccolo: Grand Kai, hmph what is he going to do?

King Kai: he can help you, he can help you reach the level of limit-less power. Piccolo, this can be your chance.

Piccolo: You know, back in the past i'll say yes without hesitation but now i'm not so sure. I'm actually worried of, who and how strong the fighter is going to be. Kai....I..

King Kai: Piccolo, stop it! You're not like this. I can see the sudden change in your eyes, it's dramatic. But I believe you can win this tournament, you've been practicing in the H.F.IL, fighting Frieza and Cell as well, and you were able to hold your own against both of them. That shows much improvement, I wouldn't offer you this if I would think that you wouldn't stand the chance. Piccolo, I sense you're struggle within you, you're struggling to stay on that line of A warrior, and your right on the border. If you do not enter this tournament, you will permanetely cross this line, to the coward side. Piccolo, will you take this challenge.

Piccolo nods his head

Piccolo: Thank you, kai.

King Kai: C'mon.

Piccolo: Where are we going?

King Kai: To meet your opponents.

Author: Who will Piccolo be fighting, what lies ahead for this warrior and will Piccolo be able to win back his spirit, find out next time on Dragon Ball X!

[SSJ Taingo]

Episode 2: Piccolo meets Pikkon....

King Kai and Piccolo arrive at a planet full of people who are sparring.

Piccolo: W-What is this?

King Kai: This is where some of the greatest fighters in the world who still hold there bodies like yourself, come and train just for the chance to see the ring of the world tournament.

Piccolo: Oh, I see. Whoa!

A certain power-level catches his eye.

Piccolo: What is that!?

King Kai: What!?

Piccolo: I'm sensing two huge power-levels almost identical, one power-level is original, i've never sensed anything similar to it, but the other one is strangely familiar.

Piccolo runs towards the pl he sensed first, which was the un-familiar one with king Kai running right behind him. Suddenly, Piccolo see's Pikkon, facing three huge guys, they are Toro, Lato, and Hatho.

Toro: You're goin' down puny man.

Pikkon: Look, I really don't want you gentlemen to be embarassed, so please do not talk nay sort of smack.

Hatho: Hey, i think he's gettin' scared.

Lato: Let's pound his frog face in! HAHAHAHA!

pikkon: You were all warned.

The two men charge at him at the same time, Hatho first with a right hand that hits Pikkon, Lato and Hatho both punch Pikkon several times in the stomach, and then they both do one huge drop kick that sends him flying, crashing into five trees.

Toro: This is the great Pikkon, he's nothing but a joke to me.

Suddenly Pikkon appears right in front of Toro.

Pikkon: That was just something to test your strength, and to tell you the truth all of you aren't anywhere near my level!

Toro balls his fist and tries a right hand but pikkon dodges it with ease, then Toro continues with several punches, pretty soon Hatho and Lato join in but all they're able to hit is the wind. Pikkon startsscreaming and a huge yellow aura comes around him, the aura is so powerful the wind forming around it pushes the three challengers into the sky, they all stop in mid-air and extend there hands aiming directly at Pikkon.

Hatho: Take this!!

They all fire three huge ki balls, but the yellow aura surrounds Pikkon again, the ki ballls hit Pikkon, as the smoke clears Pikkon is nowhere to be found.

Lato: That should've at least left a leg!

Suddenly Pikkon appears in front of Lato, and right kicks him in the jaw, Lato falls to the ground motionless, the two others charge at Pikkon with full-speed, but Pikkon fires two ki blasts and they both fall to the ground, Pikkon lands on the ground rubbing his hands, then he looks at Piccolo who's standing ther with his arms folded, and sweat dripping down him. Pikkon approaches Piccolo.

Pikkon: Hmph, nice armor.

Piccolo: Yea, I can say the same for you, My name is Piccolo and that was some nice work you did back there, good job.

Pikkon: Thanks, ah so you're Piccolo, Goku told me I should meet up with you because of our similar clothing styles.

Piccolo: You fought Goku?

Pikkon: Yes, but it ended up as a tie so we didn't get to finish our battle.

King Kai clears his throat.

Piccolo: Kai, what's wrong with you, i'm trying to have a conversation here!

King Kai: He is the student of my worst enemy.

Pikkon: No, not anymore.

King Kai: you're no longer with the West Kai?

Pikkon: No, though a kai he is very dis-honest and I didn't feel the need to work with him anymore. I am with the East Kai now.

King Kai: Then who's...

Suddenly a huge yellow ki blast is shot from the sky, a young boy is seen floatingin the air, he's tanned skinned, hair like Teen Gohans, about Trunks' height, a little bit muscular but not that much, a huge scar on his left cheek, and he's wearing a black tank top and brown pants with blue boots. The boy slowly floats down.

West kai: I'd like you to meet my new assistant....Torch!

Piccolo thinking: This guys power...it's like nothing i've ever seen in my life!

Author: Who is this new young fighter, is he the power that Piccolo has been feeling all this time, find out next time on DragonBall X.

P.S: Can you guys please send me some feedback on this man, yes i am real bored ok.

[demise1er]

write the next episode that **** was bad. it actually seem like a real dbz episode mush props

[SSJ Taingo]

Episode 3: West Kai's new student/training begins

While West Kai and North Kai are arguing, Torch sits down and leans on the tree with his eyes closed and arms folded, Pikkon is too busy looking at West Kai and North kai go at it, and Piccolo is looking at Torch wondering about him.

Piccolo thinking: I don't get it,why is his power-level so familiar. Have I met him before, it makes no sense.

Piccolo looks at the Kais.

Piccolo: STOP IT!

The kais suddenly stop. Piccolo looks at West kai.

Piccolo: Kai, what's with your new student.

West Kai: What do you mean what's up he's mine, I found him.

Piccolo: What do you know about him, where'd he come from.

West Kai: I don't know, I literally found him wondering around the spirit world. I told him I needed a fighter of his caliber for the tournament, and he would have indestructable power if he won by getting trained by the Grand Kai. But despite all that, he will not tell me where he has come from. I asked King Yemma but him and Torch have kept a bond and has vowed never to tell his secret, only he can tell it.

Pikkon: But look at him, he's nothing more then a boy.

West Kai: 16 years old to be exact, but he has amazing power. I don't understand it, I haven't seen him bust a smile ever since he came here.

King Kai: Maybe it's because he's only a teenager who's DEAD!

West Kai: No, I think there's a little more to it.

King Kai: Well, they're not better then my guy Piccolo right here, if you think Goku was trouble wait until you see my man piccolo fight, he'll have your jaw broken just for opening it so wide.

West Kai: Hmph, Torch!

Torch opens his eyes, and stands up. He approaches West kai.

Torch: What do you want, I was trying to take a nap.

West Kai: Listen, power up but not to your secret weapon, I want that to be a surprise.

Torch: How much.

West Kai: Just enough to shake the planet, do damage, ya know stuff like that.

Torch nods his head.

Torch: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAHHHHHHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

As torch powers up, grounds start to crack, mountains collapse, not only does the whole planet shake, but so does the whole spirit world.

Piccolo: Amazing.

Pikkon: And he's only a boy.

West Kai: Ok, stop!

The boy stops.

West Kai: That's only a taste of what's instore for you.

King Kai: That was ok, listen, if you'll excuse us me and my boy Piccolo here are going to start training.

Pikkon: Yes, after that display i'd better go to my Kai as well, train even harder.

West Kai: Look at all you fools running away, HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

King Kai: SHUT UP! Piccolo lets go.

Piccolo: Um, torch. Before I go I need to ask you something, who are you...really?

Torch: I will only tell you, if you're able to beat me at the tournament.

Piccolo: Hmph, I see, then i'll see you there.

Piccolo and King Kai fly to there planet, and Pikkon flies towards the north kai. Everyone starts training and practicing until the big day.

Author: What will happen, as there days get shorter and the tournament days get nearer. You wouldn't wanna mess the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball X!

[RetardedGoku200]

That sounds like a real script! READ MY XIV JEWELS OF POWER SERIES! I MADE IT YESTERDAY AND I POSTED IT EARLIER 2DAY! LINK IS IN MY SIGNATURE!

[RetardedGoku200]

Send feedback to my series

[demise1er]

hurry write 4 and if you have put it this **** is tight

[QMark]

To tell you the truth, so far it is the best one here. Some character flaws here and there but still the best one here. Take it as a compliment because I hardly every give someone a Good Job speech.

I guess I will tell you your minor flaws so you can correct them easily. All your flaws were character analysis. Pikkon's character can't defect from his Kai because that's the side of the Universe he belonged to (Each Kai owns their own Galaxy so keep that in mind). Also, the fact that you made Piccolo so girly is unbearable. Piccolo is a witty character. Never before has he shown to be as useless as you put him.

Thats all the criticism I gave you. Good day.

[RetardedGoku200]

Qmark and Demiser, Check out XIV, my Fanfic. Its awesome but it aint as good as this

[RetardedGoku200]

XIV JEWELS OF POWER has nothing to do with Db/z/gt but has similarities

[QMark]

Just checked it and left a response.

[SSJ Taingo]

Episode 4: The tournament begins

In the background, the crowds cheer on, people stomping on there chairs, the crowd shouting for there favorite fighters. The first one to come is the East Kai, with pikkon, The crowd cheers and roars. It's like the ceiling is about to pop off, next is King Kai and Piccolo, the crowd does the same as well, even though they don't know who's King Kai's new protige is, they remember the champion Goku who he had taken under his wing. Next up is West Kai with Torch, the crowd cheers for West Kai and the final one is South Kai, the crowd goes silent like no one had come out yet.

The Announcer: Is everyone ready for a good time!

The crow chers once again.

Announcer: Excellent, we have to give our fighters a good break, nealy 200 fighters have joined, but we have made qualifying rounds so even though there are 200 fighters, we are going to have to bring them down to 8! We have many fighters this year, but I think what everyone really wants to see is the on-going Kai competition. As you all know each Kai has chosen one representative to represant his or her team. Pikkon was suppose to belong with the West Kai, but he is now with the east due to a conversation with king Yemma. As you now all will know, this tournament is very different from our lasts with alot of modifications. Each Kai could only have chosen one representative, so I hope these are the strongest warriors they were able to find. Now, we have chosen this obstacle for special purposes. We have thought about this long and hard, there are exactly 200 people in this tournament so we will set up groups of four. Each group will have to work togethor and fight a warrior from the H.F.I.L. We the kais have each chosen a warrior that is suitable for this competition, if A person on your team is eliminated then he will not be in the game. The last eight people in the tournament will be the ones who continue to fight in the tournament, is everyone ready!

The crowd says yes all at once.

Announcer: Let's get this started, the teams have already been picked with the four kai representatives automatically having to be togethor.

Piccolo, Pikkon,Torch, and the South Kai representative Norktie approach each other.

Piccolo: Listen, we're all going to have to work a sa team, I plan on facing all of you in the next round got it.

Pikkon: Yes, Piccolo is right we must work as a team.

Torch: Hmph, why so you all can ust stab me in the back!? Look, i'll play my part, and you guys play yours.

Norktie: Hey punk, i'm getting real sick and tired of your mouth so some respect!

Torch: Why would I respect someone who is inferior to me in everyway.

Norktie: What you little...

But before Norktie can finish his sentence, all the teams dissapear within a blink of an eye. The kai representatives arrive at a mountain-like area, suddenly a screen floats down with the announcer on it.

Announcer: A team member will be eliminated if they are unable to fight, are you guys ready! FIGHT!

Torch: I don't see anyone.

(Over here)

They all look behind them and they see none other then...cell.

Piccolo: It's him...again!

Cell: Hi there Piccolo, long time no see.

Piccolo: Why would they let you compete in a tournament.

Cell: Well, I really don't get anything really, but The Saiyan Cells in me wanted a good fight.

Piccolo: No, i'm stronger then this. Cell, demons like you have plagued my mind long enough, it's time I awaken the warrior that has been deep within my heart, Gentlemen, get ready!

Norkteia, Pikkon, and Piccolo all charge at Cell while Torch just stands there looking at them.

Torch: Hmph, idiots.

Piccolo fires a huge ki blast then sends Cell crashing to the ground, Cell quickly gets back up only to get knee'd in the face by Pikkon. Cell automatically crashes into the mountains.

Piccolo: Well, looks like the old kai was right, I am stronger now. HAHAHAHA, what am I worried about, Hey Cell, did you like all that target practice!

Cell gets back up and starts charging a kamehameha wave.

Cell: Ka...Me...Ha....Me....

Cell suddenly uses Instant transmission to do the same move that Goku had did, but only to Norkteia, as the smoke clears Norkteia is nowhere to be found. The announcer comes on the screen.

Announcer: Norkteia..South Kai representative has been eliminated.

Piccolo: Damn it, why him!

Cell: I wanted to get the weakling out of the way to make room for my real power.

Cell powers up like never before, but suddenly Torch comes out of nowhere and kside-kicks him in the face, Cell stumbles back a bit, Torch continues his assault, he punches Cell several times in the stomach, then grabs his tail, twirls him around a bit then throws him in the air. Cell stops in mid-air and starts charging up Friezas death ball.

Piccolo: Oh no, he's using Friezas attack!

Torch: Who's attack?

Piccolo: Fireza, we have to stop him before it fully charges up.

Suddenly Pikkon goes behind Cell and puts him in a full nelson, Cell struggles to get away from him but Pikkon is too strong.

Pikkon: Charge up, finish him!

Torch and Piccolo charge up there biggest ki blasts, and shoot it straight at Cell, Pikkon let's cell go the last minute so Cell will get hit with the blast, Cell is blown to bits. The announcer screen suddenly comes down.

Announcer: Winner, and the three who will qualify for the next round.

The three warrios return to the arena, they see Norkteia sitting on the bench next to the south kai. Piccolo approaches him.

Piccolo: Don't be too hard on yourself, Cell has tricks up his sleeve like that you would've never guess he would've done it.

Norkteia: Thanks man, go win that tournament for me alright.

Piccolo nods his head, the Announcer gets everyones attention.

Announcer: What a grueling battle, ladies and gentlemen we have our final eight finalists! Here are the line-ups.

1st Piccolo vs Kariko
2nd Axel vs Barrel
3rd Pikkon vs Donsil
4th Torch vs Blazer

Announcer: Will the first two contestans please step to the stage.

Piccolo shakes hands with Pikkon, and then arrives at the stage facing a gray-skinned man, who has red hair going back stopping at his neck, he's wearing no shirt, with black pants and red boots on.

Kariko: I hope you're ready!

Piccolo: Oh I am tin-man.

Author: Will our fighters be able to advance to the final round, find out next time on Dragonball X!

[demise1er]

whens the next episode coming hurry man this **** is getting good

[QMark]

The story just keeps getting worst. I'll stop reading here.

[SS4 Dark Saiyan]

hurry make the next episode. its almost as good as the show and since they stopped makeing the show this is all thats left.

[Vegeta105]

Make the next episode....please. I beg you

[SS4 Dark Saiyan]

come on make the next episode. after they stopped making new episodes i was sad until i read this. plz continue.

[Vegeta105]

Maby hes writing right now.Its probanly taking him some time.It must be long.

[SS4 Dark Saiyan]

yeah he probably is. and Torch sounds like Gohan to me... or Future Trunks.

[Vegeta105]

Except for the additude

[SS4 Dark Saiyan]

still doesnt rule out future trunks. he acts mysterious in the beggining

[Vegeta105]

I wonder whos going to win in the tournement.Torch or Pikkon.Probobly we will find out in episode 8

[blooddemon95]

hows the next one commin i cant wait

[SSJ Taingo]

Episode 5: Piccolo vs Kariko

Piccolo stares at his opponent a little bit of sweat dripping down from his cheek.

Piccolo: Just to warn you ahead of time, I strongly doubt that you stand a chance against me.

Kariko: Hmph, looks can be decieving.

Kariko starts powering up, a silver aura surrounds, after done powering up Kariko stands up straight, a silver aura still surrounding him smiling at Piccolo.

Piccolo: Pretty good, but I won't even have to take my hat off for this one.

Kariko smiles at piccolo, then he suddenly dissapears, the crowd is speechless wondering where'd he go, but Piccolo eyes starts moving around like he see's his movements. Suddenly Kariko teleports in back of Piccolo and tries to kick him but Piccolo jumps in the air. Kariko, not to be out-done, follows Piccolo into the air and tries to side kick Piccolo with his left leg but Piccolo blocks it and punches him in the face, sending Kariko crashing to the ground, as Kariko slowly drops to the ground he flips around a bit and performs a perfect landing. Piccolo then fires a few ki balls at Kariko, Kariko dodges them but barely.

Kariko: Enough!

Kariko opens his mouth and shoots at a huge ki beam, Piccolo puts both arms in front of his face in an x-shaped format, he stands his ground and the beam heads straight towards him. As the beam hits him, smoke surrounds Piccolo. Kariko thinks he has won the match.

kariko: HAHAHHAHA, looks like i'm advancing to the next..wha!?

But Kariko has spoken too soon, Piccolo is standing firmly with not a scratch on even his clothing. Meanwhile Torch and Pikkon look on.

Pikkon: Man, i'm beginning to think all of earths fighters are power-ful.

Torch: He's good, but he's not that good. It's like our destiny is already written in stone, I will prove that I am the strongest fighter in the spirit world.

Pikkon: Hmph, you think you're all bad huh? Listen kid, you may be good but you have never been in a tournament, I know what to expect, I know the surprises, so if I were you I wouldn't hold my breath.

West Kai: No Torch, hold your breath!

Torch looks at Pikkon for a moment, then continues to look on the battle between Piccolo and Kariko.

Piccolo: Listen, just give up! I want this to be over as quickly as posible and by the way you're fighting, you've proven to be a small player in this game!

Kariko: You think it's over, well it's not Namek! This is not my true power, this isn't even my true form. Piccolo, what you see now is mearly a shell of what my true form is like. Allow me to show you! AHHHHHH

Kariko does a guard-stance and starts powering up. The whole arena starts shaking, cracks go through the walls of the tournament arena, as well as Karikos shell. The shell slowly starts to crack open and finally, the whole entire shell breaks off. This new Kariko is light-skinned, about the same size as Trunks. He has long black hair with his hair stopping at his waist, black eye-brows, but silver eyes and a silver bear'd across his chin. He's Trunks' height, he has on no shirt and a silver star on his chest and four going across his arms straight down. He also has on silver pants and silver boots as well, he looks at Piccolo with a smirk on his face. He still has his silver aura, but blue lightning sparking from it as well.

Kariko: This is the true power of my race!

Piccolo: Well (Piccolo starts floating to the ground) looks like this is about to get more interesting.

Kariko charges at piccolo, Kariko punches Piccolo in the face and follows it with an upper-cut to the chin, you can see spit flying out of Piccolos mouth. Kariko goes for a kick but Piccolo blocks it and shoots a ki blast from his hand straight at Karikos stomach, Kariko holds his stomach but regains his strength back and kicks Piccolo in the face. The two warriors exchange blows, Piccolo goes for a right kick but Kariko ducks and and headbutts Piccolo. Kariko goes for a right hand but Piccolo grabs his right hand, and kicks him into the air. Suddenly Kariko extends both of his hands.

Kariko: Silver static!!

A huge ki blast comes out of Karikos hand with blue lightning coming out of his hand. Piccolo counters it by quickly forming his hands in a triangular shape, and fires his attack.

Piccolo: MASENKO-HA!

The two energy blasts collide, the ki struggles lasts for a grueling 15 minutes, but Piccolos masenko technique starts gaining the upper-hand. King Kai is there cheering on.

King Kai: YAHOO, IT'S ALL OVER!

Torch and Pikkon look on, Pikkon looks in awe but Torch looks on with a serious look in his face. Suddenly, piccolos Masenko technique over-powers the silver static technique and hits Kariko, Kariko falls to the ground quickly. The announcer starts counting.

AnnounceR: 1....2...3...4..5..6...7..8..9..10 The winnier, is Piccolo!

The crowd cheers, Piccolo walks up to Kariko and extend his hand.

Piccolo: You need help.

Piccolo picks up Kariko and carries him on his shoulder with the crowd continuing there cheers and chant his name.

Crowd: PICCOLO, PICCOLO, PICCOLO, PICCOLO!

Piccolo sets Kariko on the bench.

Piccolo: You were pretty good out there, and to be truthfully honest you might've been able to beat me.

Kariko: Man, with moves like that I don't think so.

Piccolo: No, that was your first time using that transformation, if you had used it earlier and trained with it you would've been more then a challenge.

Kariko: Well, what's done is done. I'll keep that in mind in the next tournament, so I hope you take care of your body until then.

Piccolo: Don't worry, i'l be ready my friend.

Torch looks at Piccolo having a conversation with Kariko and whispers to himself.

Torch: Moron, it's that type of sentimental garbage that makes him such a weak warrior.

Piccolo looks at Torch and approaches him.

Piccolo: I can't wait until we fight, child or not you deserve a good spanking!

Torch: Please, the way you fight you should be stored in a trash can.

Piccolo grabs Torch's collar.

Piccolo: WHAT WAS THAT!

But as tension rises between Torch and Piccolo, the announcer announces the next opponents.

Announcer: Will the other contestants please come to the stage.

Axel and Barrel walk to the stage. Axel is a young woman with blue skin, and green wild hair, she also has a few scales on her. She's wearing a black tank-top which is armor and tight black pants, Barrel on the other hand is a huge muscular man with a mustache and bear'd, black short hair with brown short sleeved-shirt, and some blue sweat pants with brown shoes..

Barrel: HAHHAHA, this going to be pie!

Meanwhile King Kai looks at Axel until a sudden rush comes over him.

King Kai: IT CAN'T BE!

Piccolo: What is it Kai?

King Kai: Axel, she's part of an ancient Tsuki-dragon race that was destroyed by an eruption on there planet years ago, There was only five of them, and they all were pure at heart. They had excellent ki abilities but did not posses the skill of a fighter, so it's shocking to see a Tsuki-Dragon in this tournament, especially one so young.

Pikkon: Well, this tournament is full of surprises.

Piccolo: yes, I can see how surperior Axels pl is towards Barrel.

Torch thinking: Whatever, they still have limits.Something that I have not had in a long time.

Axel look at Barrel.

Axel: I will give you the oppurtunity to hit me, you can hit me as many times as you want until I decide it is time you end.

Barrel cracks his knuckles.

Barrel: Whatever!

Author: Is Axel really as dangerous as King Kai claims her to be, and what about Torch, how will he fair in his match? All this and more on the next exciting episode of Dragonball X!

[blooddemon95]

nice keep it up man that was a good one

[SS4 Dark Saiyan]

this is the best story i ever heard. keep it up and u might be able to actually make a show of dbz. keep up the legend! sell it to atari and maybe they'll make DragonBall X a realltiy lol. yeah i know they r finshined with dbz but still...

[USSJ 4 Gogeta]

Sweet Episodes Man keep the good stuff coming cant wait till the next episode

[Vegeta105]

Dude that was the coolest Draganball X episode I have read.

[Th3DarkCloud]

yeah and now i have to post my comments on it through this account . so not fair. my other account SS4 Dark Saiyan stopped working when i made it stop auto-login. now i cant even manually login. it goes to the thing when i type my pass and username it says. thank u r now logged in as SS4 Dark Saiyan then when its done loading it takes me back to the login screen. can some1 help?

[SpIrItOfGoHaN]

Like Qmark said......."the story is getting worse"

I like the story but there are too many flaws in it....